my every moment gone

11th February 2008

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there will be a moment
when I will have lost
every fibre of my being

all my memories gone
all the names
all the faces
all the journeys
all the places
my every moment gone

and in that moment
I will miss you


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20 Months ago



20 Months ago


“but the romantic in me insists on believing that even at that moment, i will be missed.”

or that you will miss someone/whomever? the words can go both ways.


20 Months ago


mere dost, this is beautiful. you are beautiful. bas. subhanAllah (:


20 Months ago


also: why is the “i” capitalised when the rest of the poem is in lowercase? hmm.


20 Months ago


I converted to lower case a whiles back.
I mean, proper post I will start sentences with caps and all.

and I will still be caps… because to me, “i” doesn’t feel just right.

I remember in a fit of a moment, I changed all the category names to lowercase… and the page names to lowercase…

and my signature “Adnan.” to “adnan.”

now you know everything, but why the I is upper case, is still unclear.

=)


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