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maghrib mein ho gareeb, to mashriq mein kya ameer thay
gintee tumhe na wahaan aati thi, na yahaan aati hai

Comments 8

  1. zindagi-ki-diary wrote:

    Achha hai.

    Puri ghazal karo

    Let me do second sher…lol

    pur-sukon na yahan rahe, na wahan the kubhi
    neend tumhe na wahan aati thi, na yahan aati hai

    Posted 23 Feb 2008 at 3:46 pm
  2. adnan. wrote:

    wah! kya baat hai! =)

    Posted 23 Feb 2008 at 3:52 pm
  3. adnan. wrote:

    I did have an inkling of a thought in my mind… that this could/should be extended. =)

    Posted 23 Feb 2008 at 3:53 pm
  4. adnan. wrote:

    aur kya waqt aagaya dost
    ke koi mujshe kahe “puri ghazal karo”
    aur mei is darr mein hoon
    kuch adhoora na reh jaye

    Posted 23 Feb 2008 at 4:02 pm
  5. zb wrote:

    beautiful (:

    Posted 23 Feb 2008 at 7:44 pm
  6. yasmine wrote:

    i lowve it, adnan! =) that was indeed beautiful.
    and it’s so rocking that mystic has come along and added on to it, too.

    Posted 24 Feb 2008 at 1:17 am
  7. adnan. wrote:

    thanks zb and yasmine ji.

    and that is totally rocking, with the add on. this is why I love the internet.

    Posted 25 Feb 2008 at 6:40 am
  8. adnan. wrote:

    okay… I have added two more sher to this. and will re-post as a new post soon. yes.

    Posted 26 Feb 2008 at 10:13 pm

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  1. From jaadu hai » Blog Archive » phir se maghrib on 05 Jun 2008 at 2:33 am

    [...] the third time a rendition of this (written or spoken) has been posted here. Initially it was just [two lines]. Mystic commented saying “puri ghazal karo”, and added lines of his own. Then at some [...]

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