maghrib mein ho gareeb, to mashriq mein kya ameer thay
gintee tumhe na wahaan aati thi, na yahaan aati hai
Achha hai.
Puri ghazal karo
Let me do second sher…lol
pur-sukon na yahan rahe, na wahan the kubhi
neend tumhe na wahan aati thi, na yahan aati hai
wah! kya baat hai! =)
I did have an inkling of a thought in my mind… that this could/should be extended. =)
aur kya waqt aagaya dost
ke koi mujshe kahe “puri ghazal karo”
aur mei is darr mein hoon
kuch adhoora na reh jaye
beautiful (:
i lowve it, adnan! =) that was indeed beautiful.
and it’s so rocking that mystic has come along and added on to it, too.
thanks zb and yasmine ji.
and that is totally rocking, with the add on. this is why I love the internet.
okay… I have added two more sher to this. and will re-post as a new post soon. yes.
[...] the third time a rendition of this (written or spoken) has been posted here. Initially it was just [two lines]. Mystic commented saying “puri ghazal karo”, and added lines of his own. Then at some [...]