I really want to show ‘em
and try and get to know ‘em
perhaps I’ll write a poem
and while I may show it
both you and I know it
that I am no poet
I really want to show ‘em
and try and get to know ‘em
perhaps I’ll write a poem
and while I may show it
both you and I know it
that I am no poet
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what a rhyme scheme. =D
Posted 29 Feb 2008 at 3:18 pm ¶=) this would be such an awesome spoken word piece. see ya at the open mics, adnan!
Posted 29 Feb 2008 at 3:30 pm ¶iffat - the last two lines “know it”/”poet” were what I came up with first (in an actual conversation no less, hah). the rest of it was kinda “constructed” around that. =D
yasmine - I would love to someday do a longer piece that, more than rhyme, has rhythm. especially when it’s spoken. inshallah. =) thanks!
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