Comments on: deceptive lines http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/2008/05/21/deceptive-lines/ tumhare nazroon mein jaadu hai Thu, 18 Mar 2010 05:50:41 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: adnan. http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/2008/05/21/deceptive-lines/comment-page-1/#comment-773 adnan. Fri, 13 Jun 2008 00:49:47 +0000 http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/?p=247#comment-773 thanks yasmine! thanks yasmine!

]]> By: yasmine http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/2008/05/21/deceptive-lines/comment-page-1/#comment-772 yasmine Thu, 12 Jun 2008 20:48:08 +0000 http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/?p=247#comment-772 i love all the details in this post, adnan - the hand under the thigh, the bridge, the 'sound of the tire against the asphalt.' so much attention to detail, and such great writing, buddy! i love all the details in this post, adnan – the hand under the thigh, the bridge, the ’sound of the tire against the asphalt.’ so much attention to detail, and such great writing, buddy!

]]> By: adnan. http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/2008/05/21/deceptive-lines/comment-page-1/#comment-707 adnan. Wed, 28 May 2008 15:20:24 +0000 http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/?p=247#comment-707 thanks Anjum... thanks Anjum…

]]> By: Anjum http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/2008/05/21/deceptive-lines/comment-page-1/#comment-706 Anjum Wed, 28 May 2008 14:37:17 +0000 http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/?p=247#comment-706 very nice - esp the last para. ties it all together. its where the action is. but the whole thing leads up to it nicely. very nice – esp the last para. ties it all together. its where the action is. but the whole thing leads up to it nicely.

]]> By: adnan. http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/2008/05/21/deceptive-lines/comment-page-1/#comment-701 adnan. Sun, 25 May 2008 15:28:08 +0000 http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/?p=247#comment-701 thanks guys... i like the last paragraph because nothing comes after it. thanks guys…

i like the last paragraph because nothing comes after it.

]]> By: mystic http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/2008/05/21/deceptive-lines/comment-page-1/#comment-700 mystic Sun, 25 May 2008 07:18:01 +0000 http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/?p=247#comment-700 Achha hai ! Achha hai !

]]> By: yaser http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/2008/05/21/deceptive-lines/comment-page-1/#comment-697 yaser Sat, 24 May 2008 05:08:44 +0000 http://www.jaaduhai.com/blog/?p=247#comment-697 i like the last paragraph i like the last paragraph

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