life is like a box of chocolates

they always had issues
trying to communicate
she was always punctual
but he was always late

she wanted to talk flowers
but he always thought rockets
she told him to get a life
he got her a box of chocolates

Comments 6

  1. Anjum wrote:

    and??? was it too little, too late?

    Posted 09 Jun 2008 at 12:41 am
  2. kk wrote:

    very nice. thank you

    Posted 09 Jun 2008 at 7:50 am
  3. adnan. wrote:

    @anjum - haha, no comment. =)

    actually, maybe it’s always too little, but never too late? I’m not sure how this ends.

    @kk, thanks. =)

    Posted 09 Jun 2008 at 9:37 am
  4. iffat wrote:

    this reminds me of tim burton’s poem “Stick Boy and Match Girl in Love” i shared with you people not too long ago:

    Stick Boy liked Match Girl,
    he liked her a lot.
    He liked her cute figure,
    he thought she was hot.

    But could a flame ever burn
    for a match and a stick?
    It did quite literally;
    he burned up pretty quick.

    Posted 09 Jun 2008 at 10:32 am
  5. adnan. wrote:

    @iffat - haha, that was hilarious! except, come on! that one ended with fire and this one ends with chocolate.

    Posted 09 Jun 2008 at 10:50 am
  6. zb wrote:

    dude, this has quite a jonarno flavour, eh (:
    and i love the last line, thank you.

    Posted 10 Jun 2008 at 12:17 am

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