then again

17th July 2008

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i await a day
where with a clear mind
i can read a book
and then again
and then again
and then again
and maybe, then again

a day
where with a rocking rhythm
i can strum a chord
and then again
and then again
and then again
and maybe, then again

a day
where with my echoes
i can sing a song
and then again
and then again
and then again
and maybe, then again

a day
where with simple words
i can write
and then again
and then again
and then again
and maybe, then again

a night
where with the clouds, the stars, the moon
i can breathe
and then again
and then again
and then again
and maybe then …


Comments



12 Months ago

Ummm.. try doing this one in Urdu :D

Maria I

12 Months ago

i just might. =)

adnan.

12 Months ago

i think erum might like this one. especially if you make it a song. with actions (:

zb

12 Months ago

hmmm… erum would love it! maybe not a song, maybe just a voice over, with a video. well, maybe a song, but we’ll to make a tune to go with it, and get noaman to sing it.

but i’m really liking the voice over video idea. i already have the some of the shots/scenes thought out. that’s awesome!

i’m meeting a friend who does improv and stage theater acting, to discuss ideas and do some practice filming… we’ll see where that goes.

adnan.

12 Months ago

also, these lines are tricky. in the sense that if you change all the “and maybe” to “but maybe”, the entire tone changes.

adnan.

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